Yanked through the Gateway, I fight down the bile as Mike hastily pulls me from the ground.
“Where are we?” he asks.
I can only stare at the field of sunflowers where our sprawling city just stood.
“Not where,” I answer.
Category: microstory, yeah write
Time traveling is always disorienting, I hear. Perfect imagery here. I loved it!
Haha – Thanks Melony! 🙂
now you need to write the rest of the novel that goes with that opener. I’m hooked
Haha!! I have a problem with doing that! 🙂 Thank you!
ohh the future or the past? :O i’m intrigued!
The possibilities are endless! 🙂 Thanks for stopping by!
This left me breathless. Great tension.
Thank you so much Cyn!
Loved the twist. I didn’t see that coming and agree that this could launch I much larger story.
Thank you so much Marcy! I love using yeah write to fiddle with small ideas I hope to expand upon one day. Thanks for stopping by!
I love the sci-fi vibe with the mysterious “Gateway.” The picture of stunned disbelief through the dialogue. And sunflowers always make me happy. 🙂
Thanks Jennifer! And I completely agree. Imagining a giant field of sunflowers just makes me smile 🙂
way better than a sprawling city 🙂
OOH! What happens next? You can’t leave us hanging!
Hah! I know, I know! I do this way too often to you guys! 🙂 Thanks for stopping by!
Perfect. I must admit I’m a bit disappointed there weren’t more time travel stories this week. 😀
Thank you! I was pretty surprised too which is why I dove in late yesterday. Haha. Thanks for stopping by and reading!
OOh Time Travel! Once again, you’ve left me wanting to read more of this. Love it!
Thank you so much!
Oh! Past or future? Who knows. Could be both at the same time…dun dun duuuuun.
Oh the possibilities! Haha – Thanks for reading!
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