The Inbetween

I float, but a whisper of my former self. Before was such solid,
corporeal being. Now I fade, sweeping back, forth.
Sometimes I see you as you wish to see me;
but each time, I dim further…
vanishing slowly,
into the
black.

12 Comments on “The Inbetween

  1. This is utterly haunting and I love the way you’ve formatted it to look like it’s disappearing….vanishing, slowly…brilliant!!

  2. Agreed on the visual shape ^^ So effective in reflecting the (poignant) sense. Love this line: “Now I fade, sweeping back, forth.”

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