Shattered
Shattered remnants litter the floor.
I love you.
Spirits mingle with the stench of your betrayal.
I love you.
Falling to my knees, I break like the scattered glass around me.
I love you.
Three words I heard you whisper to another.
Shattered remnants litter the floor.
I love you.
Spirits mingle with the stench of your betrayal.
I love you.
Falling to my knees, I break like the scattered glass around me.
I love you.
Three words I heard you whisper to another.
Wow!! I love everyword
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Thank you!
Wow. You nailed this one, Arden. The flow, the words…incredible. Good stuff!
Thank you so much Susan!
Mmm the stench of your betrayal. yup.
Haha – Thank you!
Very nice. The two-way use of “I love you”–the shattered/scattered–and frankly, it looks amazing, visually.
Thank you Jennifer!
Nice. Amazing play on words. Spirits mingled with the stench of your betrayal. I bet that reeks! Brilliant job!
Thank you Kathy!
Poor thing. This is heartbreaking. It would be nice if we could just unlove someone more easily.
Agreed
Thanks for reading Stacie!