Shattered

Shattered remnants litter the floor.
I love you.
Spirits mingle with the stench of your betrayal.
I love you.
Falling to my knees, I break like the scattered glass around me.
I love you.
Three words I heard you whisper to another.

12 Comments on “Shattered

  1. Very nice. The two-way use of “I love you”–the shattered/scattered–and frankly, it looks amazing, visually.

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