Shattered Posted byArden RuthMarch 4, 2015February 23, 2016Posted inmicroprose, yeah write Shattered remnants litter the floor. I love you. Spirits mingle with the stench of your betrayal. I love you. Falling to my knees, I break like the scattered glass around me. I love you. Three words I heard you whisper to another. Spread the love:Click to share on Facebook (Opens in new window)Click to share on Twitter (Opens in new window)Click to share on Tumblr (Opens in new window)Click to share on Reddit (Opens in new window)Click to email a link to a friend (Opens in new window)Click to print (Opens in new window)Like this:Like Loading...
12 thoughts on “Shattered”
Wow!! I love everyword
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Wow. You nailed this one, Arden. The flow, the words…incredible. Good stuff!
Thank you so much Susan!
Mmm the stench of your betrayal. yup.
Haha – Thank you!
Very nice. The two-way use of “I love you”–the shattered/scattered–and frankly, it looks amazing, visually.
Thank you Jennifer!
Nice. Amazing play on words. Spirits mingled with the stench of your betrayal. I bet that reeks! Brilliant job!
Thank you Kathy!
Poor thing. This is heartbreaking. It would be nice if we could just unlove someone more easily.
Agreed Thanks for reading Stacie!