I feel it deep within. The small square dissolves on my tongue and the music fades. My body begins to tingle, legs bouncing to the rhythm. It returns slowly, thumping within my chest. I raise my arms and disappear into the crowd.
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Arden Ruth 
Yep–all about the bass! You captured the feeling very well.
Thank you!
Sometimes I do and sometimes I don’t like that bass thump in my chest. Today, I do with your story! Sounds a bit like the 70s, too!
Haha!! Thank you!
Drugs are bad, mmmkay?
🙂 That’s why i tagged it fiction! Haha
What a cool take on the prompt! Far out, man…:-)
Haha! Thanks Susan 🙂
I love this – 42 words of pure anticipation, with a beat. Very cool way to answer the question, Arden!
Thanks Christine! 🙂
That was just SO good! 42 words of blissed-out escape.
Thank you Candace! I’m glad you enjoyed it 🙂
I like how the music fades in and out – could imagine the sensitivity brought on by that little square – until the bass takes over completely. Much enjoyed.
Thank you Sarah Ann! 🙂
It’s like 1969 in here today. Well done.
Haha – Thanks Thom! 🙂
I went to a rave once. ONCE. No drugs were involved. lol But there were A LOT of them going around! I love that I can read this and actually feel the music!
I’ve never been to one and I sometimes hate that. But then I remember how much I hate crowds and I know I’d have to be on drugs to go to one. Haha 🙂
Lol seriously! I hage crowds too
Umm hate. Dumb phone!
Oh, the good ol’ days – how fun! (I think it’s funny an insurance ad popped up beneath your story. lol)
Hah! I can’t see that 🙂 That’s funny!
Very cool. I’ve never been either and always kinda regretted it. I’m much too old now, though, so thanks for the trip 😉
Haha – Anytime! 🙂
Oh heavens this took me back. I can see the flashing lights and smell the sweaty crowd. Well done!
I bet that smelled good 🙂 Thanks April!
This totally took me back to my bar days. The way the dance floor vibrated. You captured it well.
Thanks Nate!