Whether gone hours, months, days, or years; it does not matter.
Time means nothing to the sparkling lights.
They wink at me from on high and I know they watch closely.
We all await our own eternity to dance among the stars.
What’s so amazing that keeps us stargazing?
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32 thoughts on “Among The Stars”
lovely, and so true.
Thanks! 42 words is hard! I’m not used to this micro-fiction stuff 🙂
It is!! Lol I’m not used to it either.
I like it when you make up words 🙂
That’s a word!! Lol.
Nice way of thinking about death. An eternity dancing with stars sounds so much better 🙂
I know, right?! Thanks Stacie! 🙂
Such an uplifting and deep sentiment in such few words is hard to achieve. And yet, you make it look effortless.
Oh wow! Thank you so much! 🙂
Very nice. We all dance eventually… the music of the stars compel us to.
Love the last line.
I like the hope conveyed by the last line.
I have to agree with the other comments above – a beautiful last line that sells this piece. 🙂
Beautiful! You say it’s hard, but you make it look so easy. 🙂
Awwww thanks Christine! I’m just usually fairly long-winded so it was a nice (but difficult) change of pace!
Beautiful! Love the whole thing, but that last line is a stunner. 🙂
I’ve felt like this lately, that I’m just waiting for that chance…
Thanks Natalie! 🙂
There’s something about the timelessness of the stars that’s mind bogglingly inspiring.
Heh, we both have similar-ish endings. Hopefully, a case of great minds thinking alike 🙂 Good one.
Exactly! 🙂 Thank you!
This is beautiful!
Time can be such a burden! Lucky stars.
Beautiful piece. (:
Thank you! 🙂