Beast in a Bottle

The beast bobs up and down,

drifting toward the shore.

He rides the crest of a wave,

smiling through the violent crash,

somersaulting to the sandy depths.

Only one thing remains,

his unleashing.


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37 Comments on “Beast in a Bottle”

  1. Have you seen the deep sea fish they found off the coast of California. There is probably more than we ever dreamt tickling our toes as we ride the waves. Fun read.

    • No I haven’t!


      Holy crap! Yet another reason I no longer get in the ocean πŸ™‚

      Thanks for stopping by!


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