The beast bobs up and down,
drifting toward the shore.
He rides the crest of a wave,
smiling through the violent crash,
somersaulting to the sandy depths.
Only one thing remains,
his unleashing.
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I love the take on “The Letter in a Bottle”. Very cool.
Thank you! 🙂
Oh this one seems like it might bite your toes while bathing
Haha! Yes, indeed 🙂
I always wanted to find a message!
I don’t think you want to find this one! 🙂
Probably not! Though I’d be the idiot to open it!
Ooh, I really LOVE this one!
Thanks stranger!! 🙂
Or, I guess, Blogosphere Stranger!
Have you seen the deep sea fish they found off the coast of California. There is probably more than we ever dreamt tickling our toes as we ride the waves. Fun read.
No I haven’t!
~Googling~
Holy crap! Yet another reason I no longer get in the ocean 🙂
Thanks for stopping by!
Cool… I can add this to my list of reasons I don’t go to the ocean!
Haha! My fear of the ocean fueled this one 🙂
There’s a kind of an eldritch feel to this poem. Nice job!
Thank you!
A “message” of the very worst kind! Excellently creepy!
Thank you! 🙂
I’ll send an SOS to the w…AAAAAAAAAAAH!
Well played!
HAH! 🙂
All he has to do an wait. Good one!
Thanks! 🙂
Um, my mind immediately went to bathroom humor. Freud would have a heyday.
Hah – That is hilarious! 🙂
Beautifully written !
Thank you!!
Nicely done! But keep it leashed! Whatever you do! 😀
Will do! 🙂
This sounds very freeing!
🙂
What a cool thought–the beast in a bottle. Great job with the prompt. Thanks for linking up.
Thanks! 🙂
I might think twice if I’m ever lucky enough to find a message in a bottle! Fun poem!
Thanks!! 🙂
An evil message in a bottle, muahahahaha!
I can tell you have a great evil laugh 🙂
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I like to tap my fingers together while I do my evil laugh too. It’s the whole shebang. 🙂